Thor

Sep. 23rd, 2012 02:05 pm
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The door from Milliways opens on the early morning landscape of the Capital Wasteland. Beyond the door is stony, blighted territory, the shadows of burnt, weathered stumps long in the morning sun. "The crater where we'll be picked up by the ship is just over that hill," Ellen says, indicating a swell in the landscape ahead of them. "I got kind of tired of walking half a mile to reach the nearest house with a door to get to the Bar, so I tore out an internal doorframe from the building and brought it here instead. It doesn't actually connect to anything, but it gets me back and forth- and we can always go to the house again if we need to, on the way back."

She glances at the Asgardian and adds, "We'll be traveling to the ship by a teleportation beam. There are two humans on board who can operate the controls, so it'll either be Dr. Tercorien or Sally on the other side."

Date: 2012-09-26 04:00 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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It really is of a people he's never seen. This isn't surprising, by now, but it's fascinating.

He hopes Heimdall is watching. Just in case this is something Asgard should know about. Odi-- Loki should be told.

Thor inclines his head slightly to the green worker in greeting, and then glances at Ellen. Is there anything she wants to say?

Date: 2012-09-26 04:17 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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If Thor were used to being a self-effacing translator, rather than an envoy in his own right, he would repeat this word-for-word as she says it.

But he's Thor. So he does speak, overlappingly, but there's some paraphrasing going on.

"My friend cannot speak your language," he says, "and nor can the other humans on this vessel. Her name is Ellen. I am Thor, son of Odin."

"Ellen also means you no harm. She would like to learn more about your people and about this ship."

Date: 2012-09-26 04:34 pm (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor in human clothes, looking serious and maybe annoyed (serious and a little cranky)
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This one, Thor does repeat word for word, in an undertone overlapping Zur's words, after a quick "It says" preface. Paraphrasing is one thing, but this seems important to be clear about, and it's harder to pick out the important parts for an unfamiliar speaker of an unfamiliar society. He's not negotiating merely on his own behalf.

To Zur, it will probably sound weird, because to its ears Thor is simply repeating the exact same thing in its own language. So it goes.

Date: 2012-09-28 01:03 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
From: [personal profile] mjolnir_retriever
Hmm.

Thor considers that dilemma for a long moment, weighing words.

"We will protect this planet and its people," he says to Zur at last. "But if this ship in your hands does not threaten them, there is no cause for us to obstruct your job. And perhaps there may be cause for aid, if you need aught you lack to maintain yourselves or Zeta. There are those who hold a grudge against your people as well for your masters' acts, but Ellen and I do not."

Date: 2012-09-28 02:18 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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Yeah, Thor's repeating that one back, too.

It seems the kind of thing Ellen should hear in Zur's own words, or as close as the Allspeak allows, without the risk of some detail being elided.

Especially since all of it is hopeful news, as far as Thor can tell from the summary of the situation he's gotten.

Date: 2012-09-28 03:01 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
From: [personal profile] mjolnir_retriever
Hmmm.

To Ellen -- although Zur, perforce, will understand it too -- Thor says, "Then we have reason to come to an understanding on both sides. Is there aught else you would require?"

Date: 2012-09-28 03:55 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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Thor nods.

And mulls this over. He's not sure how much authority Ellen has to make final decisions -- she's here negotiating, and she hasn't said anything about the need to delay, but she does have superior officers. In any case, they're not Thor's to make.

"I would propose an agreement," he says, thoughtfully, to them both. "If it is acceptable to Ellen and to Zur's people."

"Zur and his people will have freedom to remain on the ship as they will. None will molest them, including those who have done so in the past. If they have need of supplies or aid from Earth, they may ask, and see what surplus may be given without depriving others."

"In trade, Ellen and her people will claim the frozen humans that were brought here. They will claim the human supplies stolen with them. If you know how to stabilize or thaw them safely, that aid too would be appreciated. Ellen will have use of the ship's death ray at need, as she and her comrades claimed it from the ones who brought this ship here in an act of war."

Plunder is a totally valid claim, in Thor's book.

Date: 2012-09-28 04:06 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor in a diner looking confused and maybe vaguely indignant (I meant no disrespect...?)
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Thor glances at Ellen to see if she has any objections, although it's pretty much for form's sake. He can't imagine why that would be a problem--

oh, right. She didn't catch that.

"He wishes to speak to the others of his kind before giving you a decision."

Date: 2012-09-28 02:57 pm (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor in t-shirt and plaid and jeans, walking forward on a devastated street (showdown at the OK corral)
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And, indeed, they do.

Thor's looking around as they go with an interest that's half tourism and half tactics. (And, it must be said, with a little bit of gratitude that this ship was built with taller beings than Zur in mind. He appreciates not having to hunch under a low ceiling.) But he keeps pace easily, interest or no.

Long legs help!

Date: 2012-09-28 04:30 pm (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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"Greetings," Thor rumbles again.

He pretty much can't help looming, and isn't disposed to try, but he's aiming for casual and with peaceful intent. At least by his own species' body language, which matches up with human pretty well.

Sadly, he doesn't hang out in the right circles to think gosh, this looks like a LAN party while the boss is on vacation.

"My companion and I mean you no harm."

He'll see whether Zur or Ellen wants to add any further preface or start on the explanation, or if they want him to do so again.

Date: 2012-09-29 03:11 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor in human clothes, looking serious and maybe annoyed (serious and a little cranky)
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Since Zur's not misrepresenting anything, Thor is happy to leave this part to him.

To Ellen, he nods a little, though to be honest Thor has no real comprehension of either lifestyle. Even in his exile, he has a whole (and reasonably healthy) planet to find his way in. He's never lived in a resource-starved wasteland, or an enclosed self-sufficient ship, or anything less comfortable than Milliways or a small town in New Mexico -- certainly not for longer than the duration of a training exercise.

"It seems a good enough place to them," he agrees.

The to them is tossed in because of Thor's not-quite-belated realization that, without the context of Ellen's statement, it might sound like they're plotting to acquire this space. At least to a potentially suspicious group of people who actually value the idea of living among computer banks and worm vats, which Thor does not.

Date: 2012-09-29 04:06 am (UTC)
mjolnir_retriever: Thor looking genuinely serious (this is serious business now)
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Thor is just as glad for the subject change away from discussions of spending the rest of one's life away from one's home planet. (That's the part that has resonance for him; confined quarters would be a hardship, but they're enough outside his experience that he can't quite wrap his brain around the prospect enough to feel the emotional hit.)

He repeats Mox's words for Ellen, in an undertone. "What favor do you ask?" he inquires at the end, regarding Mox and Zur seriously.

He's been listening to their discussion, of course. But in truce-making, the terms should be stated plainly and for all to hear.

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